David Guinness

I just have to put in my two bits. :) The original was good. This is better. :D "And love the hacker and the virus both." It's an amazing poem, ...

Well done, Brad. The line phrasing is really quite ingenious.

At one time, I considered composing a Will and Testament. I know, unfortunately, many persons here would take these treasures away from my family. But I need not these treasures ...

I must say, I absolutely adore autumn. All the pretty leaves, falling from the trees.... Fried. And battered. Dipped in brown gravy.... What a magical time of the year. - ...

I like this poem very much. Well done, yoha_ahoy. There are a few diction and syntactic suggestions I might have, but I can't think of what they might be at ...

RoseEmma, structure isn't stupid. Structure is important to a poem, no matter the poem's purpose. It really is quite distracting to the reader with different line lengths. Especially with a ...

Eggs. Fried. And battered. Dipped in brown gravy.... I have issues. - Ophelia Is there anyone you loathe?

Choose Your Own Adventure stories are great! There were quite a few of those books written, actually.. Nate, you might also investigate some of the old text adventure programming, if ...

I just wonder what some of the other substitutions were... "Yes, this is Elastic Loaf Hut, may I take your order?"

Strange... at the moment, all I see is placeholder for the ads, but no content. Just red Xs. I looked at the source, and it looks correct.

Erm.. sorry, Nate... :D Yes, I think that's one to block. I'll go take... the word that's starts with an A that means the same as the word that starts ...

Yes, it's lacking a few syllables here and there, but as Bjorn said, it's fine. Even Shakespeare often had sonnets with either 9 or 11 syllables on a line.

You have a point, Bjorn. The only difference is a middle name. I'm just saying.

Okay... Yes, the information (not much, mind) is provided to most any institute that requests it, however- many school districts now put a form similar to this in the yearly ...

And about Romance, Bubble Bath, and boyfriends catching on fire...